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2018-05-25 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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5/2 In not more than ten sentences, tell me how communication is changing between people. People can understand without communication by gestures and facial expresions. However sometimes they can misunderstand each other. Because people have diffenrent ideas so sometimes they translate what they want to hear. If they accept the ideas positively, it is ok but people might often think negatively. That is why people need to use the language to communicate each other. Communication will help each other understanding.

강사 첨삭

Kindly check the corrections below MISS [이름]!

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~Teacher Shanee^^,

5/2 In not more than ten sentences, tell me how communication is changing between people.

People can understand without communication by gestures and facial expresions.

>>> People can communicate through gestures and facial expressions.

However sometimes they can misunderstand each other.

>>> However sometimes, they can misunderstand each other.
Because people have diffenrent ideas so sometimes they translate what they want to hear.

>>> Because people have different ideas so sometimes they interpret what they hear differently.

If they accept the ideas positively, it is ok but people might often think negatively.

>>> Correct! [okay]

That is why people need to use the language to communicate each other.

>>> That is why people need to use a language to communicated each other.

Communication will help each other understanding.

>>> Using a language help each other communicate effectively.

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