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If I have a robot to do all my chores, I will make it wash the dishes.
>> OR: If I have a robot that can do housework, I will make it wash the dishes.
We have two to three meals and we drink water, so no matter how many time you spend washing the dishes, it doesn\'t end.
>> We have two to three meals and we drink water, so no matter how many times we do the dishes, it doesn\'t end.
And washing dishes is a work that I can do without thinking, and I\'m sick of this kind of work. So I think I want to have a robot to do my dishes.
>> Also, washing the dishes is a chore that I can do without thinking, and I\'m sick of this kind of work. So I think, I want to have a robot to do the dishes.
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