homework
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If you are going to travel in a one place where it will be and why?
If I go on a trip I will go to Easter island in Chile to see Moai statues.
When I knew the size of statues, I was deeply impressed. From then on, Seeing the statues is my wish. So, if I have a chance to travel, I will go to Easter island.
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If I go on a trip I will go to Easter island in Chile to see Moai statues.
>> If I am going on a trip I will go to the Easter island in Chile to see Moai statues.
When I knew the size of statues, I was deeply impressed. From then on, Seeing the statues is my wish. So, if I have a chance to travel, I will go to Easter island.
>> When I knew the size of the statues, I was deeply impressed. From then on, Seeing the statues is one of my wishes. So, if I have a chance to travel, I want to go to the Easter island.
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