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Thanks for sharing your experiences with me here once more, James. I love it when I get to read your compositions.

Again, take it easy there, my friend.

And of course, enjoy your time!

All the best!

-Klein-

Could you tell me some memorable experiences of yours during the holiday?
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As I said, I was in my son\'s room in Seoul on last holidays.

>>As I said, I was in my son\'s room in Seoul during the last holidays.
 On Saturday evening, we went the YEONSEI university because it\'s a festival season.

>>On Saturday evening, we went to YEONSEI University because it\'s their festival.
 There was a performance for the university students.
>>Correct 

Some of famous Korean entertainers was invited a guest in the performance.
>>Some famous Korean entertainers were invited as guests in the performance. 

Because we didn\'t have tickets, we couldn\'t enter the performance arena.
>>Correct 

But we could heard the live music near the stage. 

>>Correct

It was a good experience to me because it was first time to hear the live music.
>>It was a good experience to me because it was my first time to hear some live music. 

And I promised to my daughter to go to the LOTTE amusement park when we stayed in Seoul.
>>And I promised my daughter that we would go to LOTTE amusement park when we stayed in Seoul.

So all of my family went there on Sunday and spent a day at there.
>>So all my family went there on Sunday and spend a day there. 

My daughter really liked riding riders.
>>My daughter really liked riding the attractions. 

She rode several riders and enjoyed her time very happily.

>>She took several rides and enjoyed her time very happily.
 It was memorable experiences that I had in the holidays.

>>They were memorable experiences I had in the holidays.