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2018-05-25 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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Well, internet and television is very i teresting. Yea. But I don't think the book will be obsolete. There are the charms of the book that the internet or television can't imitate. So it will be the very far future to treat the book as a obsoleted thing. I can't imagine the world without books.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong Won!

Good job on your compositions for this week.

I will send you some topics next week.

Let\'s keep this going.

Have a great weekend!

~~ Teacher Sharon

Well, internet and television is very i teresting. Yea.
>> Well,  the Internet and television are very interesting. 
But I don\'t think the book will be obsolete.
>> But I don\'t think  books will become obsolete.
There are the charms of the book that the internet or television can\'t imitate.
>> There is a certain charm of books that the Internet or television can\'t replicate
So it will be the very far future to treat the book as a obsoleted thing.
>> So it will be very far into the future when we treat books as obsolete.
I can\'t imagine the world without books.

>> Correct

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