Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Seong Won!
Good job on your compositions for this week.
I will send you some topics next week.
Let\'s keep this going.
Have a great weekend!
~~ Teacher Sharon
Well, internet and television is very i teresting. Yea.
>> Well, the Internet and television are very interesting.
But I don\'t think the book will be obsolete.
>> But I don\'t think books will become obsolete.
There are the charms of the book that the internet or television can\'t imitate.
>> There is a certain charm of books that the Internet or television can\'t replicate
So it will be the very far future to treat the book as a obsoleted thing.
>> So it will be very far into the future when we treat books as obsolete.
I can\'t imagine the world without books.
>> Correct
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