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학생이 쓴 원문
I like summer because it is not cold. I like to go to the beach in summer. I like to go to swimming pool in summer. I like to go to the valley in summer. I like to sleep in the summer. I like to go to PC room in summer. Because I want to be cool in summer because it is hot.
강사 첨삭
I like summer because it is not cold.
>> CORRECT
I like to go to the beach in summer.
>> I like going to the beach every summer.
I like to go to swimming pool in summer.
>> I like going to the swimming pool every summer.
I like to go to the valley in summer.
>> I like going to the valley every summer.
I like to sleep in the summer.
>> I like sleeping every summer.
I like to go to PC room in summer.
>> I like going to the PC room every summer.
Because I want to be cool in summer because it is hot.
>> Because, I want to feel refreshed in the hot days of summer.
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