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2018-05-28 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

학생이 쓴 원문

It's almost the weekend again. When was your best weekend? What happened? ==> There was a 4 days holiday last weekend. It started from May 19th and ended at May 22nd. At that time, I met my friends in the golf club. Sometimes we meet to enjoy our time and it makes us to reduce the stress when we get it atom the company. And we met my son in Seoul and spent much time with him. The last day of the holiday, I took a rest at home. I think it was the best weekend of the year.

강사 첨삭

Hello, James!

How\'s it going?

These days, even a one-day holiday already means so much to me. lol

I am so glad you got that 4-day holiday. More in the coming days, my friend, and enjoy them with your loved ones once more.

ALL THE BEST!

-Klein-

It\'s almost the weekend again. When was your best weekend? What happened?
 ==>
 There was a 4 days holiday last weekend.
>>There was a 4-day holiday last weekend.

It started from May 19th and ended at May 22nd.

>>It started on May 19th and ended on May 22nd. 
 At that time, I met my friends in the golf club.
>>Correct  

Sometimes we meet to enjoy our time and it makes us to reduce the stress when we get it atom the company.
>>Sometimes we meet to enjoy our time and reduce the stress we from the company. 

And we met my son in Seoul and spent much time with him.
>>Correct 

The last day of the holiday, I took a rest at home.
>>On the last day of the holiday, I took a rest at home. 

I think it was the best weekend of the year.

>>Correct 

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