homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What is your proudest accomplishment so far this year? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences.
My accomplishment is receive the big prize in the school.
I want to receive prize and I hope to help about go to good university.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Always give your best in everything you. Aim higher! Good luck!
~T. Kelly^^
What is your proudest accomplishment so far this year? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences.
My accomplishment is receive the big prize in the school.
>> I consider the big prize I received at school as my greatest accomplishment this year.
I want to receive prize and I hope to help about go to good university.
>> I hope the prize I received could help me in entering a good university.
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