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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello KC,
Man often becomes what he believes himself to be. If I keep on saying to myself that I cannot do a certain thing, it is possible that I may end by really becoming incapable of doing it.
T. Jeny
1. When
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2. But
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3.and then or and
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4. Because, when
>> that, when
5. during
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6. Although
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7. Who
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After doing paragliding last saturday, I had to go back home, because there was an ancestral rite on that night.
>>After doing paragliding last Saturday, I had to go back home because there was an ancestral rite that night.
When I arrived home, it was almost 8 o\'clock.
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And some relatives were talking each other about something and most food for the rite were prepared by my mother, daughter in law and ants.
>>And some relatives were talking with each other about something and most foods for the rite were prepared by my mother, her daughter-in-law and my ants.
I felt sorry because I didn\'t help. So, I did my best to help them after the rite.
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It finished at midnight. And at that time I didn\'t feel any pain, because I was very busy to help them.
>>It finished at midnight. And at that time I didn\'t feel any pain because I was very busy helping them.
But yesterday I felt muscle pains.
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Because It was a long time to do paraglidng.
>> Because it was a long time since the last time I did paragliding.
And paragliding makes me use some parts of my body strongly, especially legs, arms, because of the posture when I am flying.
>> And paragliding makes me use some parts of my body strongly, especially my arms and legs because of the posture when I am flying.
So, I felt pain on my legs, arms, abdominal muscle and neck after flying.
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Until now, I feel muscle pains.
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Maybe I will be better after today.^^
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Have a good day!!
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