homework
학생이 쓴 원문
If I live with my grandparents, I can learn many things I don't know.
I can learn the wisdom of life.
And I naturally know how to behave to my elders.
I live with my grandmother.
I have a lot of good things about living with my grandmother.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ho [이름]! Were very similar in many ways! >.<
I used to live with my grandparents as well. And I agree with what you said. It was nicely written. Congratulations! ~Teacher Elisha
If I live with my grandparents, I can learn many things I don\'t know.
>> I can learn many things if I live with my grandparents.
I can learn the wisdom of life.
>> I can learn about the wisdoms in life.
And I naturally know how to behave to my elders.
>> CORRECT!
I live with my grandmother.
>> CORRECT!
I have a lot of good things about living with my grandmother.
>> I learn a lot of good things from my grandmother.
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