homework

Thank you very much for doing your homework, Jake!

I think Facebook is a beneficial thing, if we know how to use it well.

Have a great Monday!

ESSAY: Should people stop using Facebook? Why or why not?
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These days lots of people are using Facebook in various purpose.

>>These days lots of people are using Facebook for various purposes.

They use it as a diary, a messanger, and a photo album, so on.

>>They use it as a diary, a messenger, a photo album, and so on.

This essay will discuss about why we should keep using Facebook.
>>This essay will discuss why we should keep using Facebook.
First, too many people have been using it for a long time.

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So, Facebook has a lot of personel data including photoes and diaries.

>>So, Facebook has a lot of personal data including photos and diaries.
These things are not only data, but these also could be memorable things they want to remember.

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That\'s why regular users in Facebook can\'t move to another SNS easiliy.
>>That\'s why regular Facebook users can\'t move to another SNS easily.
Second, people use Facebook as a messanger.

>>Second, people use Facebook as a messenger

They can chat with enrolled Facebook friends whenwever they want.

>>They can chat with their registered Facebook friends whenever they want.
Although they can use their own cell phone network they still use Facebook.

>>Although they can use their own cellphone network, they still use Facebook.
Because it gives comfortable features, such as a group messanger.
>>It is because it gives convenient features, such as a group messenger.
Desipte there are other reasons why we should keep using Facebook, but I think these 2 cause enough for keeping it.

>>Despite having more reasons why we should keep using Facebook, I think these 2 aspects are enough for keeping it.