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2018-05-28 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I don't think being selfish is depend on the age of the person. Many old people think that the many if the young people is selfish and lowbred. And many young people think that the many of the old people is headstrong. But I think it is the matter between two generation. And I wonder why the subject of this article is always changed when I write it.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong Won!

I know it\'s a little difficult to organize your thoughts.

The trick is to imagine what results you want and create the details to support the big picture.

You can try in on your next homework.

~~ Teacher Sharon

I don\'t think being selfish is depend on the age of the person.
>> I don\'t think being selfish depends on the age of a person.
Many old people think that the many if the young people is selfish and lowbred.
>> Many old people think that many young people are selfish.
And many young people think that the many of the old people is headstrong.
>> And many young people think that many old people are headstrong.
But I think it is the matter between two generation.
>> But I think it is a matter between the two generations.

 

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