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Do you get angry when you watch he news on TV and see all the terrible things happening in the world?
Yes, I get angry when I watch bad news. Especially I can't stand the people who do something bad to child or elderly. I hope that I always hear goodnews.
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Yes, I get angry when I watch bad news. Especially I can\'t stand the people who do something bad to child or elderly. I hope that I always hear goodnews.
Yes, I get angry whenever I am watching a bad news. Especially I can\'t stand to the people who are doing something bad to a child or to an old person. I hope that I always hear a good news.
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