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2018-05-29 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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What do you have to say about this: “While our brains are programmed to organize and make sense of what we see around us, our eyes can often play tricks on us”? ==> I think that kind of mistakes are occurred often. Sometimes our eyes make a mistake when we see something. When a person see something, he wants to see what he wants. Because of that there is a trick. At first, there is a mistake when we see something. And then wrong information is delivered to the brain and the brain analyse that information but it makes wrong decision. So we have to try something very objectively and it will reduce the wrong decision.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, [이름]ho!

How are your eyes playing tricks on your today?

I wonder what you see during our class. lol I better ask you about it tomorrow.

Thanks for sharing! I am glad to read another composition from you. Keep it up!

-Klein-

What do you have to say about this: “While our brains are programmed to organize and make sense of what we see around us, our eyes can often play tricks on us”?
 ==>
I think that kind of mistakes are occurred often. 

>>I think that kind of mistakes are committed often. 
Sometimes our eyes make a mistake when we see something.

>>Correct
 When a person see something, he wants to see what he wants.
>>When a person sees something, he wants to see what he wants to see.

Because of that there is a trick.
>>Correct

At first, there is a mistake when we see something.
>>Correct 

And then wrong information is delivered to the brain and the brain analyse that information but it makes wrong decision.
>>And then wrong information is delivered to the brain and the brain analyses that information but makes a wrong decision. 

So we have to try something very objectively and it will reduce the wrong decision.

>>Correct

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