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Good afternoon, [이름]ho!
How are your eyes playing tricks on your today?
I wonder what you see during our class. lol I better ask you about it tomorrow.
Thanks for sharing! I am glad to read another composition from you. Keep it up!
-Klein-
What do you have to say about this: “While our brains are programmed to organize and make sense of what we see around us, our eyes can often play tricks on us”?
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I think that kind of mistakes are occurred often.
>>I think that kind of mistakes are committed often.
Sometimes our eyes make a mistake when we see something.
>>Correct
When a person see something, he wants to see what he wants.
>>When a person sees something, he wants to see what he wants to see.
Because of that there is a trick.
>>Correct
At first, there is a mistake when we see something.
>>Correct
And then wrong information is delivered to the brain and the brain analyse that information but it makes wrong decision.
>>And then wrong information is delivered to the brain and the brain analyses that information but makes a wrong decision.
So we have to try something very objectively and it will reduce the wrong decision.
>>Correct
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