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2018-05-29 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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< Should everyone learn to speak a second language? > I think so "everyone" need not learn to speak a second language. I am studying English because I will take a trip and I wish working holiday. Just for this reason. I don't felt inconvenience when I don't know a foreign language. There are subtitles for movies and translated native language manuals for foreign products. However I think everyone don't have to learn.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Hyo Eun!

I really appreciate you doing your homework. ^^

Thank you for always putting much effort in doing so.

Your writing is much better than the previous ones.

Just be mindful of the correct spelling of the words ^^

Keep doing well! ^^

Now, please check the corrections below. ^^


< Should everyone learn to speak a second language? >

I think so \"everyone\" need not learn to speak a second language.
>> I think so, \"everyone\" needs not learn to speak a second language.
 

I am studying English because I will take a trip and I wish working holiday.
Just for this reason.
>> I study English because I will go on a trip and I wish to have a working holiday visa. Just for those reasons.
 

I don\'t felt inconvenience when I don\'t know a foreign language.
>> I never felt any inconvenience when I don\'t know a foreign language.
 

There are subtitles for movies and translated native language manuals for foreign products.
>> CORRECT
 

However I think everyone don\'t have to learn.

>> However, I think everyone doesn\'t have to learn to speak a second language.

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