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Hello there, Hyo Eun!
I hope you are having a wonderful Tuesday!
Thank you for doing homework!
You are very diligent!
Your effort is very much appreciated.
You are doing so well with your writings.
I am always looking forward to reading all your work ^^
There were only a few errors! You are awesome!
Keep it up! ^^
< Do you think curfews keep teens out of trouble? >
Maybe It don\'t.
>> Maybe it doesn\'t.
Teen\'s troubles happen at any moment.
>> Teens\' troubles happen at any moment.
Can it keep teens out of trouble If curfews execute, indeed ?
>> Can it keep teens out of trouble if curfews were implemented? Indeed.
Even if that can sometimes prevent a problem
but a lot of troubles will happen in the daytime.
>> That can sometimes prevent a problem but a lot of troubles will happen at daytime.
And now is 2018 year. curfews is like hell.
>> It\'s 2018 now and curfews are like hell.
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