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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
My hometown called Daegu.
>> My hometown called is Daegu.
>> OR: My hometown is in Daegu.
It\'s 3rd biggest city in south Korea.
>> It\'s third the biggest city in South Korea.
Resently, my city is as known as BTS member Suga and V\'s hometown to
foreigners.
>> Recently, my city is as known as the hometown of BTS member Suga and V\'s.
I talk to foreigners who is not living in Korea that I live in Daegu, many ppl said they know about my city because of BTS!
>> I talk to foreigners who is not Korean that lives in Daegu, there\'s a lot of people that are saying that they know about my city because of BTS!
I am so proud of them! haha
>> CORRECT
HAHAHAHA I laughed at your last sentence kkkkkkk oh my god, you are so cool :D good job by the way :D I\'m excited for our next class kkkkkk
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