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2018-05-29 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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Well, I have no idea if it. Yea. It will be sad to look my parents being weak. But right now, I do not have any feelings of it. I know that if I get old, I have to support my parents. But that think do not make me to feel sad or feel any feelings.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong Won!

Thank you for expressing your thoughts about this topic.

Please focus on expanding your vocabulary so that you can make better sentences.

I\'ll call you tomorrow.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

Well, I have no idea if it.
>> Well, I have no idea about it.
Yea. It will be sad to look my parents being weak. But right now, I do not have any feelings of it.
>> Yes. It will be sad to see my parents getting weaker.

But right now, I do not have any feelings of it.

>> But right now, I do not feel anything about it.
 I know that if I get old, I have to support my parents.
>>  I know that when I get older, I have to support my parents.
But that think do not make me to feel sad or feel any feelings.

>> But that thought does not make me feel sad or feel anything for that matter.

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