Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Seong Won!
Thank you for expressing your thoughts about this topic.
Please focus on expanding your vocabulary so that you can make better sentences.
I\'ll call you tomorrow.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Well, I have no idea if it.
>> Well, I have no idea about it.
Yea. It will be sad to look my parents being weak. But right now, I do not have any feelings of it.
>> Yes. It will be sad to see my parents getting weaker.
But right now, I do not have any feelings of it.
>> But right now, I do not feel anything about it.
I know that if I get old, I have to support my parents.
>> I know that when I get older, I have to support my parents.
But that think do not make me to feel sad or feel any feelings.
>> But that thought does not make me feel sad or feel anything for that matter.
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