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2018-05-30 · 첨삭 강사 Gray

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Maybe that would be fine where I can have a good job and fresh air. The air pollution is horrible in Korea because of China. I really miss fresh air. I can’t even open my window at home:( And I wish I can have super fast internet. Then I can enjoy my life with that. I wanted to leave Korea before but after Mr. [Name]-in became Korean president, I thought I can live in here a little bit longer. By the way, about the homework of yesterday, I have few questions. What if I want to say “최근 대구는 외국인들에게 BTS멤버 슈가와 V의 고향이라고 알려졌다”, then how should I make the sentence? The point is “to foreigners”. Also I wanted to say “한국에 살고 있지 않는 외국인들에게 내가 대구에 산다고 하면, 많은 사람들이 BTS때문에~” Is this same sentence that you fix it? That sentence seems to me “I talk to foreigners who are already living in Daegu” I’m soooo confused now T_T Help me please! Ps.- btw, latata was good. I didn’t know 소연 is in that team. She is very talented girl ;)

강사 첨삭

I reeeeeeaaaally want to live in Japan or in Korea >____< kkkk I also want to leave Philippines.

Maybe that would be fine where I can have a good job and fresh air.

>> Anywhere would be fine where I can have a good job and fresh air.

The air pollution is horrible in Korea because of China.

>> CORRECT

I really miss fresh air.

>> I really miss the fresh air.

I can’t even open my window at home

>>CORRECT

And I wish I can have super-fast internet.

>> And I wish I can have a super-fast internet connection.

Then I can enjoy my life with that.

>> CORRECT.

I wanted to leave Korea before but after Mr. [Name]-in became Korean president, I thought I can live in here a little bit longer.

>> CORRECT.

Well, you can also say \"Dae-gu has been paired with BTS recently.\" kkkkk and for the other sentence it is still

\"I talk to foreigners who are already living in Daegu\" kkkk ^^

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