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2018-05-30 · 첨삭 강사 Grace

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Why our physical health and mental health are important? Physical health is very important to maintain our daily life. Even if you just catch a cold, you should rest in your house without going out. And mental health is also important to keep our positive thinging. If your mental health is not good, you will have a hard time feeling bad emotions such as depression, anxiety, and sadness.

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Physical health is very important to maintain our daily life. Even if you just catch a cold, you should rest in your house without going out.

>> Our physical health is very important to maintain our daily lives. Even if you just a cold, you should rest on your house without going out.
And mental health is also important to keep our positive thinging. If your mental health is not good, you will have a hard time feeling bad emotions such as depression, anxiety, and sadness.

>> And our mental health is also important to keep our positive mind. If your mental health is not good, you will be having a hard time to feel bad emotions such as depression, anxiety, and sadness.

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