HOMEWORK~~

Hi, Hyo Eun!

Happy Wednesday to you!

Thank you for doing your homework!

I hope you are having a wonderful Wednesday afternoon ^^

Please take note of the proper spacing, proper capitalization and do not forget to use punctuation marks when it\'s due ^^

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< Do you think credit cards do more harm than good? >

No, it has more good.
>> No, it does more good.
 

We can buy the products even if we don\'t have many money right now.
(but Interest occurs)
>> We can buy things even if we don\'t have any money right now. (However, there will be accrued interest.)
 

And we need credit cards when we do internet shopping.
>> Also, we need credit cards when we do internet shopping.

>> OR: Also, we need credit cards when we shop online.
 

We sould go to bank or ATM because deposit money for buy the products in internet shopping if we don\'t have credit cards.
>> We should go to the bank or ATM to deposit money for us to be able to buy things on the internet if we do not have credit cards.
 

Also we carry only cards. So we don\'t need carry change.
>> Also, if we carry cards, they won\'t need to give us change.

Anyway credit cards are good for certain if you don\'t be a greed.

>> Ergo, credit cards are good for people who are not greedy.