Homework

Hi Seong Won!

The most important thing in life is balance.

We know what we must do and what we want to do.

We can balance things out and be secure as well as happy.

You will figure this out someday.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

Well, the average of retirant age in Korea is 60.3, so I will be retire from my job.
>> Well, the average retirement age in Korea is 60 years old so I will retire from my job.
And if my retirement pay is very little, I have to gather some money for living.
>> And if my retirement pay is very little, I have to earn some money in order to live
But it is the story when I have the stable job.
>> This is true when I have a stable job.
Korea is being very,hard to get a stable job, so it is possible for me to fail of getting the stable job.
>> It is very hard to get a stable job in Korea, so it is possible for me to fail in getting a stable job.
And also, my dream is very unstable job, so if I attain my dream, I can be very poor woman.
>> My dream job is not a stable one so if I stick to this dream, I can be a very poor woman.
Than I will have to do anything to collect money, and when I get to old to work, maby I have to do the leave with state subsidy.
>> Then I will have to do anything to make money, and when I get too old to work, maybe, I can get a pension.
Oh man, maby I have to let go of my dream and study die hard, and get the stable job.
>> Maybe, I have to let go of my dream and study hard to get a stable job.
That is what my perants and school and this society require.
>> That is what my parents, school and this society require.
They keep say to us to \'Just study, the most important thing in your life is gaining money, not your dreams.\'
>> They keep telling us to study and the most important thing in life is earning money and not one\'s dreams.
I know that I have to gain money and study anyway, but di I have to let go of my dreams to get the stable job?

>> I know that I have to make money and study anyway, but do I have to let go of my dreams to get a stable job?