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2018-06-01 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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My parents didn't have to pick up the trashes and get them out of the apartment. When they were young, they lived at a house instead of apartment. They just left trashes in front of a door, and cleaner would pick p the trashes. But nowadays, I have to do a chore my parents didn't do because we live in an apartment.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

Thank you for sending your homework.

Cheers!
Jean

My parents didn\'t have to pick up the trashes and get them out of the apartment.

>> My parents didn\'t have to pick up and throw out the trash.

When they were young, they lived at a house instead of apartment.

>> They lived in a house instead of an apartment when they were young.

They just left trashes in front of a door, and cleaner would pick p the trashes.

>> They just leave the trash in front of the door and a cleaner would pick them up.

But nowadays, I have to do a chore my parents didn\'t do because we live in an apartment.

>> But nowadays, I have to do a chore that my parent\'s didn\'t do because we live in an apartment.

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