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It\'s really hard to choose one of them.
>> CORRECT
They are all so lovely and give me good energy everyday.
>> They are all so lovely and they give me good energy everyday.
But if I have to choose only one, I deffinitly would go out with JK.
>> But if I have to choose just one, I would definitely go out with JK.
I wish I have a son like him. haha. I want to cook for him.
>> I wish I could have a son like him. Haha I want to cook for him.
I\'m really appreciate them. So I want to treat them!
>> I really appreciate for what they are doing. So, I want to treat them!
I would cook for JK and make some lunchbox for other members.
>> I would cook for JK and I would make some lunchboxes for the other members.
JK is very strong so he might can carry all. hahahaha.
>> JK is very strong. So, he might be able to carry all of them.
If I have more time I would love to do some activities like hiking or bowling.
>> If I have more time. I would love to do some activities with them like hiking or bowling.
But it would be better let him just take some nap after eat.
>> But, it would be better to let him just take a nap after eating.
They doing a lot of things everyday, so they need some rest.
>> They’ve been doing a lot of things every day. So, they need some rest.
Suga always look super tired. He looks like barely move his body.
>> Suga always looks super tired. He looked like he barely can move his body.
I wish they\'re always be healthy T_T And you too, Gray! :D
>> I wish they will always be healthy T_T and you too Gray! :D
Hahaha that was cute kkkkk ah, I wish I could like just go to Seoul tower and have a wonderful dinner with Chung-Ha >____< then we could make dance videos together and have photoshoots together >__< kkkkkk
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