homework

Hello! Thank you so much for this essay.  I believe that you are well aware of the topic on climate change. ^_^
~T. IRENE~
Describe an environmental problem or event:
 I\'d like to talk about the problem of global warming.
>>> Correct.
It\'s happening all over the world, and it\'s getting worse and worse.
>>>  Correct.
In the past, people used a lot of fossil fuels for development.
>>>  Correct.
Back then, they did not know how the use of fossil fuels produced so much carbon dioxide.
>>>  Correct.
Several years later scientists proved that the carbon dioxide causes global warming.
>>>  Correct.
 Global warming causes icebergs to melt.
>>>  Correct.
And it does serious damage to human society.
>>>  Correct.
For example, melting icebergs make sea levels higher.
>>> For example, melting icebergs make sea levels rise higher.
Therefore, some land like Japan will sink to the sea in the future.
>>> Therefore, some islands like Japan are likely to sink in the future.
And it also affects the temperature of the ocean.
>>> This also affects the temperature of the ocean.
It could destroy the marine ecosystem.
>>> Correct.
These days, some Korean fishermen say that it\'s hard to catch fish they used to get.
>>> These days, some Korean fishermen say that it\'s hard to catch as much fish as they used to get in the past.
 So, most of goverments made an agreement that they limited using it.
>>>  So, most governments made an agreement that they will limit using fossil fuels.
And, now many scientists are trying to make alternative energy.
>>> Now, many scientists are trying to find an alternative source of energy.
I hope our efforts will make a good impact to this environmental problem.
>>> Correct.