homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What is the most interesting city to visit in your country? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences.
Most interesting city in my city, I think it is the Seoul city.
Seoul is capital in the country and there are lots of company and famous place,so there are lots of high building and lots of people.
I think the seoul is the best of the city in the world.
강사 첨삭
Hi Seoung-hun!
You must be proud of your country and your city. I hope I could visit there too so I could take a picture of all the beauty places in Korea.
Happy weekend!
~T. Kelly^^
What is the most interesting city to visit in your country? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences.Most interesting city in my city, I think it is the Seoul city.
>> The most interesting city for me is Seoul City.
Seoul is capital in the country and there are lots of company and famous place,so there are lots of high building and lots of people.
Seoul is capital in the country and there are lots of company and famous place,so there are lots of high building and lots of people.
>> Seoul is the capital of my country and there are lots of companies and famous people here.
I think the seoul is the best of the city in the world.
I think the seoul is the best of the city in the world.
>> I think Seoul is the best city in the world.
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