homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. I lost my cellphone because I am a clumsy person.
2. I am regarded as a lazy person.
3. I really enjoy reading books.
4. I like to experiment if something works or not.
5. It is important to talk with your family, on the other hand it is very difficult to speak with your family.
강사 첨삭
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1. I lost my cellphone because I am a clumsy person.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: I lost my mobile due to my clumsiness.
2. I am regarded as a lazy person.
>> CORRECT
3. I really enjoy reading books.
>> CORRECT
4. I like to experiment if something works or not.
>> I like to experiment to discover if something works or not.
5. It is important to talk with your family, on the other hand it is very difficult to speak with your family.
>> On one hand, it is important to talk with your family. On the other hand, it is difficult to speak with them.
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