homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Eunice!
Thank you for another great composition.
I\'ll call you tomorrow!
~~ Teacher Sharon
Health is the most important thing to be happy.
>> Correct
Nowadays I\'m having a toothache and headache.
>> Nowadays I\'m suffering from a toothache and a headache.
Because of them, I can\'t eat delicious food and don\'t want to do anything.
>> Because of them, I can\'t eat delicious food and don\'t want to do anything.
Family is also important.
>> Correct
There is nobody to forgive me in all situation.
>> There is nobody who can forgive all my faults.
Only my family can do that.
>> Correct
We can support each other without doubt and cost.
>> Correct
Friends is also important.
>> Friends are also important.
We have somthing to talk to only frineds, not family. ^^
>> We have some things that we can talk about with friends and not family.
I don\'t feel lonely if there are close friends nearby.
>> Correct
Money is important.
>> Correct
If I have no job and can\'t make money, I feel terrible.
>> If I have no job and can\'t make money, I would feel terrible.
I can\'t satisfy my life.
>> I can\'t be satisfied with my life.
Sometimes I want to buy a good clothes, go to nice places and have tasty food.
>> Sometimes I want to buy good clothes, go to nice places and have tasty food.
Job is important.
>> Correct
Even though I have a lot of money , I want to work.
>> Correct
It makes me to be myself.
>> It helps me to be myself.
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