Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Seong Won!
I also hope that you will always be happy.
You are such a good kid.
You deserve it.
~~ Teacher Sharon
I know what I need to be fun, but I think the fun is not happiness.
>> I know what I need to have fun, but I think that fun is not happiness.
The fun is fleeting, but I think it\'s going to be happy for a long time.
>> Fun is fleeting, but I think it\'s going to make me happy for a long time.
There is no basis for this idea, it is just my thinking.
>> There is no basis for this idea, it is just what I think.
In fact, I want to know what I need to be happy.
>> In fact, I want to know what I need to be happy.
I would like to be always happy if I know it.
>> I would like to always be happy if I just know the way.
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