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I liked YG before. Becoz they made bigbang and AKMU.
>> I used to like YG before. Because they made Bigbang and AKMU.
BUT after few issues I found out YG use press a lot for cover the truth so I thought that\'s too much.
>> But, after a few issue. I found out that YG used to cover the truth about their company. So, I thought that\'s too much.
Now I like BigHit of course. hahaha.
>> I like Bighit now of course.
But I can\'t actaully say I like some specific agency.
>> But, I can\'t actually say that I like some specific agency.
I just respect producer Bang.
>> I just respect the producer of Bigbang.
Becoz he made BTS not like other singers.
>> Because he made BTS unlike other singers out there.
He taught how to think, how to live in this world to BTS.
>> he taught me that I have to think, how can we live is this world with BTS.
So their music is not like other singers.
>> CORRECT.
Btw, your advice helped me a lot last night! hahaha
>> CORRECT
I played \"Fake Love\" with my phone during play bowling. That helped me get some energy! yay!
>> I played \"fake love\" with my phone while I was playing bowling. That helped me to get some energy! yay!
So last night was the last day of the league. And my team wasn\'t the last!!
>> CORRECT
We didn\'t have to drink in the shoe. (eww) hahaha.
>> CORRECT
League last team have to drink in the shoe.
>> The last placed team have to drink from a shoe.
That was actually so stressful whole in this season when I didn\'t get the good average.
>> CORRECT
Anyway it finished and fun season!! hahaha.
>> But anyway, it was finished fast but, It was fun!
Good job [이름] ^^ kkkk But drinking from a shoe? wow haha that surprised me kkkkkk
Thanks, Gray! :D
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