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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Seong Won!
Good luck with your volunteer work.
I hope that will make you happy.
Let\'s talk on Monday.
Have a good weekend.
~~ Teacher Sharon
I think it us up to my mind.
>> I think it depends on how you look at it.
There are many peoole who are not happy even they have a lot of money.
>> There are many people who are not happy even they have a lot of money.
And also, there are people who are happy even they don\'t have much money.
>> And also, there are people who are happy even if they don\'t have much money.
But I think I will not happy if I\'m poor.
>> But I think I will not be happy if I\'m poor.
The money is very important for me, who is collecting the books that I want to read.
>> The money is very important to a person like me who is collecting the books that I want to read.
Er, bating that...I just don\'t want to be poor.
>> I just don\'t want to be poor.
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