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Do you think a person can become a genius, or are they just born that way?
I think both afferct a people\'s intelligence but I think the genetic effects are especially important. Of course, many poeple gain knowledge through their efforts. But the special geniuses are extraordinary from birth.
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I think both afferct a people\'s intelligence but I think the genetic effects are especially important.
>> I think it is both because it can affect a person\'s intelligence, but I think it is a genetic effect from our parents or from our ancestor
Of course, many poeple gain knowledge through their efforts. But the special geniuses are extraordinary from birth.
>> Of course, many people can gain knowledge through their efforts. But the a person who is extraordinary genius are inborn.
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