Homework^^

2018-06-03 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello, Ms. [Name]. How was your weekend? I decided that I try to do my homework well. I will try to do even short answer of homework. When I did homework, Thank you for always taking it kindly. - I think Some people work harder have other values and personality than some people work narmal. I am kind of work harder. I want correct and perfect my work. So I have to do work harder. I don\'t always think this is good. Because I make myself very tired.

강사 첨삭

Hello there, Miss [이름]!

I cannot believe that it is already Monday!

Thank you for asking, I spent my weekend very well and productively^^

See you!

Hello, Ms. [Name].

>>CORRECT!
How was your weekend?

>>CORRECT!
I decided that I try to do my homework well.

>>CORRECT!

I will try to do even short answer of homework.

>>I will try to say even a short answer of my homework.

When I did homework, Thank you for always taking it kindly.
>> When I do it, thank you for always taking it kindly.
- I think Some people work harder have other values and personality than some people work narmal.

>>- I think some who people work harder have other better values and personality than some people working normally.

I am kind of work harder.

>>I am kind of person who works harder.
I want correct and perfect my work.

>> I want to correct and perfect my work.
So I have to do work harder.

>>Therefore, I have to work harder.

I don\'t always think this is good. Because I make myself very tired.

>>I don\'t always think this is good, because I make myself very tired.

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