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2018-06-05 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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It's the start of another month again. How do you feel about it? How different is this month from the previous ones? ==> It becomes summer from June. The weather will be very hot and it is hard to work in daytime. But, as you know, there are much things to do in my office. My boss was changed one month ago and he asks us to make a new developing process for our developing team. Because of that, My team members and I have to make a new process and make a report for them. So June will be very busy month. I hope that this month will be better than last month. I will do my best for that.

강사 첨삭

Cheer up! June has so much to offer you, my friend. Embrace each challenge and develop yourself.

Of course, you could ask help from the people around you, including me, if I can. lol

All the best!

-Klein-

It\'s the start of another month again. How do you feel about it?
How different is this month from the previous ones?
 ==> 
It becomes summer from June. 

>>Correct

OR >> Summer comes in June.
 The weather will be very hot and it is hard to work in daytime.

>>The weather will be very hot and it is hard to work at daytime.
 But, as you know, there are much things to do in my office.
>>But, as you know, there are many things to do in my office.

My boss was changed one month ago and he asks us to make a new developing process for our developing team.
>>Correct

Because of that, My team members and I have to make a new process and make a report for them.
>>Correct (my)

So June will be very busy month.
>>So June will be a very busy month.

I hope that this month will be better than last month.
>>Correct

I will do my best for that.

>>Correct

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