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2018-06-04 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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< Is it true that friends are the most important thing in life? > Friends is very important but I don't think "most" important. Family can be friend, if you don't have friend. You can success without friends and you can be fun life. (It may be less fun than a person with a friend).. Many people has friends, but some people can be happy without friend. Anyway I think so good for have friend but also it's so good for haven't friend.

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Good evening, Hyo Eun ^^

Your idea about this topic is really something.

You did great!

Keep up the good work ^^

< Is it true that friends are the most important thing in life? >

Friends is very important but I don\'t think \"most\" important.
>> Friends are very important but I don\'t think it\'s the \"most\" important thing in life.

Family can be friend, if you don\'t have friend.
>> You can be friends with your family if you don\'t have any other friends.

You can success without friends and you can be fun life.
(It may be less fun than a person with a friend)..
>> You can be successful without any friends and your life could still be fun.

(It may be less fun than a person with a friend.)

Many people has friends, but some people can be happy without friend.
>> Many people have friends but some people can also be happy without any friends.

Anyway I think so good for have friend but also it\'s so good for haven\'t friend.

>> Anyway, I think it\'s so good to have friends but it\'s also good to have no friends at all.

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