Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Seong Won!
Saving money is really important.
I\'m glad that you are responsible enough to understand that.
Keep writing!
~~ Teacher Sharon
I think I am good at saving money.
>> Correct
I always use money where the thing that I really want to have or I really need it.
>> I always spend money on things that I really want or need.
And when I spend money at the thing I really want, I always count my money and leave stated amount of money so I can save them.
>> And after spending on such things, I always save whatever amount is left.
Oh, writing this, I reamember to get back my money from my sister.
>> I suddenly remember that I need to get back some money from my sister.
She had borrow my money at last month and still she do not give it back.
>> She borrowed money from me last month and she hasn\'t paid it back yet.
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