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2018-06-04 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I think I am good at saving money. I always use money where the thing that I really want to have or I really need it. And when I spend money at the thing I really want, I always count my money and leave stated amount of money so I can save them. Oh, writing this, I reamember to get back my money from my sister. She had borrow my money at last month and still she do not give it back.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong Won!

Saving money is really important.

I\'m glad that you are responsible enough to understand that.

Keep writing!

~~ Teacher Sharon

I think I am good at saving money.
>> Correct
I always use money where the thing that I really want to have or I really need it.
>> I always spend money on things that I really want or need.
And when I spend money at the thing I really want, I always count my money and leave stated amount of money so I can save them.
>> And after spending on such things, I always save whatever amount is left.
Oh, writing this, I reamember to get back my money from my sister.
>> I suddenly remember that I need to get back some money from my sister.
She had borrow my money at last month and still she do not give it back.

>> She borrowed money from me last month and she hasn\'t paid it back yet.

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