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강사 첨삭
Stay cheerful, James!
I am so glad your family is very supportive. Share the good vibes with your pals!
I ought to thank you for sharing them with me.
I wish you all the best!
Until our next chat!
-Klein-
How do you understand “depression”? Have you ever been depressed?
How is depression addressed in your country? How do you think it should be addressed?
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I think that depression is a disease of heart.
>>I think depression is a disease of the heart.
A lot of stress can make someone to mental illness and depression.
>>Much stress can make someone mentally ill and depressed.
Fortunately, I don\'t have any experience to get a depression.
>>Fortunately, I don\'t have any experience having depression.
I try to reduce the stress and maintain my mental to clear.
>>I try to reduce the stress and maintain my mentality clear.
If the depression is serious, you have to go to the hospital.
>>If depression is serious, you have to go to hospital.
Some of Koreans have that kind of disease, so they receive the medical treatment from the hospital.
>>Some Koreans have that kind of disease, so they receive some medical treatment.
It is a disease that must be treated because it can give a damage to others.
>>Correct
OR >> It is a disease that must be treated because it can hurt others.
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