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HOMEWORK: What are the things that make you laugh easily? Please explain.
to be honest, i forgot how to laugh easily in daily life.
>>To be honest, I forgot how to laugh easily in my daily life.
i just focus on my job and i am concerning how to improve the revenue and how to get the credit as a competent sales man from my boss.
>>I just focus on my job. And I am concerned in how to improve my revenue, or how to get some credits from my boss, as a competent salesman.
but the only one that can laugh is when i play with my son and daughter after work.
>>But the only time that I can laugh is when I play with my son and daughter after work.
family always give a positive energy to overcome everything.
>>My family always gives me the positive energy to overcome everything.
or>>My family always gives me the encouragement to be able to overcome everything.
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