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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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You did a good job here. However, I have made some modifications for you to review later on.
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_T. Mayleen :)
For me \'Memorial\' means to do something or think repaeatly not to forget
my immatured thinking and behavior.
>>> For me \'memorial\' means remembering things I\'ve done, my behavior, and immaturity in the past.
everytime when I meet some hardships I can find solution and be better person through those memorial of past.
>>> Every time I meet hardships, I can find a solution and be a better person by learning from past experiences.
This can be applyed to public area.
>>> This can be applied to public
People celebrate good news but also can remember sad news also by making memorial day.
>>> People celebrate the good things but can also be reminded by the sad things that happened in the past like for example during Memorial Day.
Both things are worth.
>>> Both things are important.
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