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2018-06-07 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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For me 'Memorial' means to do something or think repaeatly not to forget my immatured thinking and behavior. everytime when I meet some hardships I can find solution and be better person through those memorial of past. This can be applyed to public area. People celebrate good news but also can remember sad news also by making memorial day. Both things are worth.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, [이름]! ^-^

A happy Thursday to you! Thank you for answering your homework.

You did a good job here. However, I have made some modifications for you to review later on.

I will see you again tomorrow.^^

_T. Mayleen :)


For me \'Memorial\' means to do something or think repaeatly not to forget
my immatured thinking and behavior.

>>> For me \'memorial\' means remembering things I\'ve done, my behavior, and immaturity in the past.

everytime when I meet some hardships I can find solution and be better person through those memorial of past.

>>> Every time I meet hardships, I can find a solution and be a better person by learning from past experiences.
This can be applyed to public area.

>>> This can be applied to public

People celebrate good news but also can remember sad news also by making memorial day.

>>> People celebrate the good things but can also be reminded by the sad things that happened in the past like for example during Memorial Day.

Both things are worth.

>>> Both things are important.

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