Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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If I live in abroad, I will miss homemade Kimchi and soybean paste stew.
>> If I live abroad, I will miss homemade kimchi and soybean paste stew.
Actually, I sometimese tried those food in several famous cities when I get tired of eating western food while traveling abroad.
>> Actually, I sometimes try to eat those foods at restaurants in famous cities abroad when I get tired of eating western food while travelling.
However, theose food taste is not same as i imagined.
>> However, the taste of these foods are not as I imagined.
Tastes is different compare to korea restraunt or at home.
>> The food tastes different compared to what they serve at Korean restaurants or at home.
I think that it\'s very difficult change the preference for the food if we spend whole childhood in one country.
>> I think it\'s very difficult to change the preference for food if we spent our entire childhood in one country.
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