HOMEWORK

Hello there, Hyo Eun!

Thank you so much for doing your homework.

I like that you are making your composition longer now.

You also made good sentences in your writing.

You are getting better each day!

Now, please check a few of the correction I have made. ^^

< Should we give panhandlers money? >

No. Because we also can hardly make ends meet.

>> No, we shouldn\'t. It\'s because we also find it hard to make ends meet. 

Panhandlers are a matter of social system.
>> Panhandlers are a seriously marginalized group in our society.
 

It\'s never shouldn\'t be solicit for contributions.
>> They should never solicit for contributions.
 

It is an individual choice.
>> Also, giving them money is a choice.
 

It just do you do it if you want to, you don\'t it if you don\'t want to.
>> Just do it if you want to and don\'t if you don\'t want to.
 

I don\'t know why we have to help for peoples with no desire to earn money.

>> I don\'t know why we have to help people who have no desire to earn money.