Homework

Hi Seong Won!

Good job on your composition.

You were able to follow simple sentence patterns.

Take note of the corrections I gave.

You can apply them in your future compositions.

~~ Teacher Sharon

Well, I gave my parents favorite snacks at the Parent\'s day.
>> Well, I gave my parents their favorite snacks on Parent\'s Day.
And that is the last thing I buy something to someone else except the errand.
>> And that was the last thing that I bought for someone else not including errands.
I usally do not buy for someone except for birthday gift.
>> I usually do not buy gifts for people.
And the last birthday of my surrounding people was my sister\'s birthday, But I do not buy her something.
>> On my sister\'s last birthday, I didn\'t even buy anything for her.
I gave her The money.
>> I just gave her some money.
And still,she did not return my money what she lone from me.

>> Actually, she still hasn\'t paid back the money she owes me.