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2018-06-08 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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What do you have to say about "regenerative medicine"? ==> I think regenerative medicine is very important thing for human being. The advancement of medicine, especially regenerative medicine, is helpful for us. I think the goal of regenerative medicine is to regenerate damaged parts by physical recovery mechanisms. If there are many troubles in human body, it will be a good solution for treating our body.

강사 첨삭

Good morning, James!

Thank you for giving time in answering your homework again. I\'m impressed that you\'re able to answer and give your precise opinion on the matter again.

Keep it up and continue learning!

Happy weekend!

-Klein-

I think regenerative medicine is very important thing for human being.

>>I think regenerative medicine is a very important thing to human beings.

 The advancement of medicine, especially regenerative medicine, is helpful for us.

>>Correct!

 I think the goal of regenerative medicine is to regenerate damaged parts by physical recovery mechanisms.

>>I think the goal of regenerative medicine is to replace damaged cells by stimulating the body\'s own repair mechanism.

 If there are many troubles in human body, it will be a good solution for treating our body.

>>If there are many problems in the human body, it will be a good solution for treating the body.

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