Homework
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What kind of exercise do you think is best?
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I think Yoga is one of the best exercise.
I did Yoga during one year,
I slimed down.
And It make me happy,
when I do not feel good.
강사 첨삭
Good day!
Thank you so much for sending this in.
It is nice to hear that you enjoy doing Yoga.
Enjoy the rest of the day.
See you!
What kind of exercise do you think is best?
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I think Yoga is one of the best exercise.
>> correct
I did Yoga during one year, I slimed down.
>> I did Yoga for a year so my body became slim.
>> OR: I became slim because I did Yoga for a year.
And It make me happy, when I do not feel good.
>> And it makes me happy when I don\'t feel good.
>> OR: It makes me feel better when I feel under the weather.
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