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2018-06-08 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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< Which is more important money or love? > LOVE!!!! I think love is more important than the money, even though you can't do want something. Even if you can do what you want because you have a lot of money, but you will be lonely if you don't have true love. Fathers say, even if they are so tired, but they are happy when their children and wife do welcome them when return home after work. The money can give happy to us but I don't want say money more important than love.

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Wow! This is mind-blowing, Hyo Eun!

Thank you for sharing your thoughts on the matter. ☺

Yes, love is more important because it is the greatest feeling. ♥

Love gives us something to do, something to hope for, something to believe in and something to invest in that makes life worth living. ^^

< Which is more important money or love? >

LOVE!!!!

♥

I think love is more important than the money, even though you can\'t do want something.
>> I think love is more important than the money, even when it can\'t buy you something that you want.

Even if you can do what you want because you have a lot of money, but you will be lonely if you don\'t have true love.
>> Even if you can do what you want because you have a lot of money, you will be lonely if you don\'t have true love.

Fathers say, even if they are so tired, but they are happy when their children and wife do welcome them when return home after work.
>> Fathers say that they feel happy when their children and wife welcome them home after work despite the tiredness.

The money can give happy to us but I don\'t want say money more important than love.

>> Money can give you temporary happiness but I don\'t want to say that money is more important than love.

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