homework
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HOMEWORK
: In what countries do you think it is hardest to be a student? WHY?
I think it’ll be South Korea. The old people, parents, in South Korea believed that only studying can give [이름]cess and rich. So, they pressed to study their children. Naturally, going to good university has become important to them. And then, they ignored what children really want to be. Even now, many student get problem like this. Therefore, I think these problem have to solve for the future.
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~~ Teacher Mia ~~
I think it’ll be South Korea. The old people, parents, in South Korea believed that only studying can give [이름]cess and rich. So, they pressed to study their children. Naturally, going to good university has become important to them. And then, they ignored what children really want to be. Even now, many student get problem like this. Therefore, I think these problem have to solve for the future.
>>> I think the country which is the hardest to be a student would be South Korea. The old people and parents believed studying is the only way to become [이름]ccessful and rich. They force their children to study and attend a good university without knowing what they really want to become in life. Many students are having problems like these and this should be solved in the future.
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