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2018-06-11 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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'give and take' means if someone give me something, than I have to give somthing too. And to me, it means 'don't take anything from someone and also, don't give anything to someone' . I do not like dealing with the person, so I try not to receive somthing from someone. It is sometimes a little bit uncomfortable to receive something from someone, actually. Of course, there are times that I have to trade with someone.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong Won!

This composition needs a little bit of work.

It could be improved if you give some specific examples and details.

The ideas are too general and you need to make your readers understand more.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

\'give and take\' means if someone give me something, than I have to give somthing too.
>> \"Give and take\" means if someone gives me something, then I have to give something too.
And to me, it means \'don\'t take anything from someone and also, don\'t give anything to someone\' .
>> And to me, it means \"Don\'t take anything from someone\" and also, \"Don\'t give anything to someone\" .
I do not like dealing with the person, so I try not to receive somthing from someone.
>> I do not like dealing with people, so I avoid receiving something from someone.
It is sometimes a little bit uncomfortable to receive something from someone, actually.
>> It is sometimes a little bit uncomfortable to receive something from someone, actually.
Of course, there are times that I have to trade with someone.

>> Correct

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