Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Seong Won!
This composition needs a little bit of work.
It could be improved if you give some specific examples and details.
The ideas are too general and you need to make your readers understand more.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
\'give and take\' means if someone give me something, than I have to give somthing too.
>> \"Give and take\" means if someone gives me something, then I have to give something too.
And to me, it means \'don\'t take anything from someone and also, don\'t give anything to someone\' .
>> And to me, it means \"Don\'t take anything from someone\" and also, \"Don\'t give anything to someone\" .
I do not like dealing with the person, so I try not to receive somthing from someone.
>> I do not like dealing with people, so I avoid receiving something from someone.
It is sometimes a little bit uncomfortable to receive something from someone, actually.
>> It is sometimes a little bit uncomfortable to receive something from someone, actually.
Of course, there are times that I have to trade with someone.
>> Correct
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