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2018-06-12 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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How do you value your eye health? How do you maintain your good eyesight? ==> As you know, my eye health is not good. As I am older and older, my eyesight is weaker and weaker. I wear glasses and I have old eyes. Because of old eyes, it is very difficult to read books if the letter is very small. There are many harmful things that gives bad for my eyes. I have to work with computers, so I have to watch the monitor all day. And smart phone also gives to my eye a damage. I try not to give damages in my eyes but it’s not easy to do like that.

강사 첨삭

Thanks for still posting this one, James!

I hope you would review the corrections below.

I\'ll catch up with you on the next board!

-Klein-

How do you value your eye health? How do you maintain your good eyesight?
 ==>
 As you know, my eye health is not good.

>>Correct
OR >> As you know, my eye health is deteriorating.

 As I am older and older, my eyesight is weaker and weaker.

>> As I get older and older, my eyesight gets weaker and weaker.
 I wear glasses and I have old eyes.

>> Correct
 Because of old eyes, it is very difficult to read books if the letter is very small.

>>Because of my old eyes, it is very difficult for me to read books if the letters are very small.
 There are many harmful things that gives bad for my eyes.

>>There are many harmful things that influence my eyes badly.
 I have to work with computers, so I have to watch the monitor all day.

>> Correct

 And smart phone also gives to my eye a damage.

>> And smartphones also damages my eyes.
 I try not to give damages in my eyes but it’s not easy to do like that.

>>I try not to damage my eyes, but it\'s not easy to do that.

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