Homework
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What do you know about vaping? What are the potential benefits of it?
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I checked the meaning of vaping.
Vaping means smoking an electric cigarette.
I stopped smoking long time ago.
So I can live without tobacco or electric cigarette.
But it is not easy to stop smoking to many heavy smokers.
It is very difficult to be patient smoking in public place.
Some of heavy smokers, they are vaping in public place.
Everybody knows the harmful of smoking.
I don't know exactly but vaping also gives us a damage and it's harmful.
So I recommend that smokers stop smoking and it will give us a happy life.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for always being so diligent, James!
I would like to commend you for being able to quit smoking. I bet it\'s hard. Although you gained much weight, I know that you are striving hard to be in good shape again. Oh yes, I promised to remind you to exercise regularly. Please go to the gym after work!
Catch you then!
-Klein-
I checked the meaning of vaping.
>>Correction
OR >> I looked up the meaning of vaping.
Vaping means smoking an electric cigarette.
Vaping means smoking an electric cigarette.
>>Correction
I stopped smoking long time ago.
I stopped smoking long time ago.
>>Correct
So I can live without tobacco or electric cigarette.
>>So I can live without smoking a tobacco or an electric cigarette.
But it is not easy to stop smoking to many heavy smokers.
But it is not easy to stop smoking to many heavy smokers.
>>Correct
It is very difficult to be patient smoking in public place.
It is very difficult to be patient smoking in public place.
>>It is very difficult to be patient when smoking in public places.
Some of heavy smokers, they are vaping in public place.
Some of heavy smokers, they are vaping in public place.
>>Some heavy smokers are vaping in public places.
Everybody knows the harmful of smoking.
Everybody knows the harmful of smoking.
>>Everybody knows that smoking is harmful.
I don\'t know exactly but vaping also gives us a damage and it\'s harmful.
I don\'t know exactly but vaping also gives us a damage and it\'s harmful.
>>I don\'t know exactly but vaping is harmful and it also damages our health.
So I recommend that smokers stop smoking and it will give us a happy life.
So I recommend that smokers stop smoking and it will give us a happy life.
>>So I recommend that smokers should stop smoking for it will give us a happy life.
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