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2018-06-12 · 첨삭 강사 Grace

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What can you do now to be successful in the future? I have to study English now, because I have Toeic examination in summer. I plan to go exchange student next year so I need high score in Toeic. And also I have to do exercise for my health from now on. I will do my best in economics, my major, too.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Mandy:)
I am very proud of you because you are doing your best to do all this things.

And I am rooting for your success.

Please check your corrections below^^


What can you do now to be successful in the future?

I have to study English now, because I have Toeic examination in summer.
>>  I have to study English now, because I have a TOEIC examination this coming summer.
I plan to go exchange student next year, so I need high score in Toeic.
>>  I am planning to be an exchange student next year so I need to have a high score in my TOEIC exam.
And also I have to do exercise for my health from now on.
>> And also I have to exercise so that I will be healthy.

I will do my best in economics, my major, too.

>> I will do my best in my economics subject and also to my major too.


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